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I think the only flaw the author has is an update stability, but she's (or he, not really sure about the gender, but I'll claim it's a she) still pretty persistent. I would like it if she has like a 2-day interval (which is pretty demanding, I know.) The story is unlike the usual reincarnation stuff I've been reading on here as of late, with a good making of character development. None of those abruptly cheat-like ability, but a slow-climb. I don't think I have to worry with the MC's usefulness or reliability in the first place, because she's being taught by courtesans at the top of their crafts. It also seems as if she's the type to be clueless and critical of her own capability which is very hard to discern with the First Person POV. The author does great putting subtle details in there. Unless you're great with spotting signs and reading between the lines, it's pretty easy to miss. Also, for the romance? It seems the author is still at the stage where she's forming possible characters to have a relationship with. I was Team Amber at first, but Maun is starting to grow on me. I have big hopes for him.

Black Ice | Deathsworn #1

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Author-san is a she uwu And ye I kinda ship Maun and Evy uwu

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Is dat: catriona gray on yer dp???? OH MY G H A D