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This one is a big NOPE for me. I tried to read some of Volume 0 and the English didn't make too much sense so I just skipped it. I tried reading the first chapter, the prologue, but even the first sentence had poorly written English. "Arriving home from Harvard University, Trinity walked slowly as climbed the stairs in light steps." If you can't get past poorly written English, then don't bother reading this. It will make you want to pull your hair out.
Monster Hunting System
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You might want to write this story in your native language and then look for someone who's willing to translate it into English. Either that, or you might want to write it in your native language and then translate it into English yourself as practice to further along your study of the English language. Good luck!
Blackvision:Thank you very much for your evaluation. Unfortunately, the english is not my language!
Johnjayjay:You might want to write this story in your native language and then look for someone who's willing to translate it into English. Either that, or you might want to write it in your native language and then translate it into English yourself as practice to further along your study of the English language. Good luck!
Actually, I found someone who will edit for me. I will continue to post and hope you follow the improvements in the novel!
Johnjayjay:You might want to write this story in your native language and then look for someone who's willing to translate it into English. Either that, or you might want to write it in your native language and then translate it into English yourself as practice to further along your study of the English language. Good luck!