Review Detail of Deisy in My rebirth is a bit wrong

My shameless review. I use Google Translate (French to English), grammar is bad. Shakespeare don't make the English language more usable when he takes the French and German language to create English. I try to have 3 Chapters per week. Story development is what I want to read. Character design, I write all on paper to have a good one. World background is very vast, I try to write it through the chapter, but it's long sorry for that.