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Sage_HiddenBear
Sage_HiddenBearLv65yr
2019-01-01 15:51

Decent wish fulfillment fanfiction. If I had a dollar per fanfiction like this that was made by single, virgin males I would be richer than bill gates. But on the positive the grammar is decent, plot aint the worst and the character isnt total trash. So thats something. Read if your bored. Could skmeone please report the endless spa. Reviews that keep appaering? Thank you.

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Jian_Chen008
Jian_Chen008Lv4

Don't dis such a legendary author

AwronZizao
AwronZizaoLv10

What's wrong with a wish-fulfillment fan-fiction? Seriously? Every story is someones wishes made manifest. If you don't like it sure, however I don't think it being wish-fulfillment is a valid reason to complain about a story. If you disagree move on, it's not constructive criticism, it's just you being unable to leave and find another story you like to read instead. Making yourself look cheap.

Strickland_Propane
Strickland_PropaneLv14

I don’t know about anyone else but isn’t this dude like sneak praising this novel? 🤣 What was that word mofos kept using? Oh, right! Tsundere! this dude likes the story, he’s just too ashamed to admit it.🤣

Sage_HiddenBear
Sage_HiddenBearLv6

Not at all. It just isnt as bad as some others but nowhere near readable. The barrier to readability drops on this website. Apparently having moderately readable stories is optional. Go figure.

Strickland_Propane:I don’t know about anyone else but isn’t this dude like sneak praising this novel? 🤣 What was that word mofos kept using? Oh, right! Tsundere! this dude likes the story, he’s just too ashamed to admit it.🤣
Strickland_Propane
Strickland_PropaneLv14

I haven’t read it and was debating if I should give it quick run through, while checking other users reviews when I saw yours standing out. Couldn’t help myself and replied to your comment with one of my own. Lol

Sage_HiddenBear:Not at all. It just isnt as bad as some others but nowhere near readable. The barrier to readability drops on this website. Apparently having moderately readable stories is optional. Go figure.
LAW
LAWLv11

Its funny how you call every author who makes erotic fanifcs that are not up to your standards ‘Virgin male’, when you know that you are a 25 year old obese fatty still living in his parents house. Get a life losers! because i’ve seen you comment the same thing on every R18 Novel.

Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

I think he is just jealous of other ,real people having relationship so he takes it out on a fanfic

Stuffedcrow
StuffedcrowLv14

its probably due to the near unreadability of most fsn fict

LAW:Its funny how you call every author who makes erotic fanifcs that are not up to your standards ‘Virgin male’, when you know that you are a 25 year old obese fatty still living in his parents house. Get a life losers! because i’ve seen you comment the same thing on every R18 Novel.
Fellbane
FellbaneLv11

Its because the intimate interractions within the majority of WN’s novels are extremely unrealistic for anyone who has actually had experience themselves

LAW:Its funny how you call every author who makes erotic fanifcs that are not up to your standards ‘Virgin male’, when you know that you are a 25 year old obese fatty still living in his parents house. Get a life losers! because i’ve seen you comment the same thing on every R18 Novel.
Hydranoid88
Hydranoid88Lv4

like u

AwronZizao:What's wrong with a wish-fulfillment fan-fiction? Seriously? Every story is someones wishes made manifest. If you don't like it sure, however I don't think it being wish-fulfillment is a valid reason to complain about a story. If you disagree move on, it's not constructive criticism, it's just you being unable to leave and find another story you like to read instead. Making yourself look cheap.
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