Writing quality 4.5/5 - the writing is good but not perfect, youll find small mistakes if you read slowly, but in a glance they are easily ignored Stability of updates 3/5 - that lower score is there because as of this review there are only 3 chapters Story Development 3/5 - has a good premise, mcs background story is a little bit over the top Character Design 4/5 - for a fanfic getting a 3 in char design is a high score but because of the OC here being the main point in all 3 chapters he carries the story quite well World Background 5/5 - its a Dragonball world that incorporates some canon facts with Fan made speculations that makes sense sooo it has great WB all in all this has the potential, hope the author keeps writing more, while it may not be the type of novel that i will craze about, i will still read this too pass the time
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