Review Detail of djdjdn in Rebirth of an Otaku in Naruto

Its a great story and has a lot of potential. Writing errors, yes, but the story and plot make up for it. There is a lot of errors when it comes to the gender such as saying she when it's suppose to be him. A couple of times some sentences are structured incorrectly or don't make sense. However, the character development, fight sences, and overall world building are great. I am excited for the future updates. My condolences to your recent loss.