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YesorNo
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Firstly, good to see another Indian author on the power rankings... it was getting lonely. Keep up the good work. Writing quality and update stability = 5 stars The story dev is good with the pacing done nicely. It is a standard apocalypse start nothing really original can be done here and it hasn't reached a point of divergence. Like in the mid stage it could go in the way of base building, organization creation or solo/team exploration or quest for a cure... anything really... but we are yet to reach that point. 4 stars. Character design. I thought that the novelty of having a reincarnator as the brother instead of the MC would be fresh... but, as the story progressed, it became clear why the trope became popular enough to develop into a cliche. The current setup is quite annoying... not only the MC, his AI too. And having two permanent characters being annoying is a big turn off. 3 stars. Although I do realize that this is a setup for future satisfaction from having the MC correct his flaws... but that is no excuse... flawed MCs can be likeable too. World background. Run of the mill zombie apocalypse with a few tweaked details... oh, how could I forget... a terror infinity-esque system. While it is unoriginal, it works... so 4 stars.

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Also, what the hell is up with the r.apist military... I so wanted to give you a 1 star for characters... but i refrained in the hope that you change the scene. Grrr.