Review Detail of NeverBeenSeen in Quick Transmigration: The Villain Saving System

The premise is ****** and we have read before. But the author was able to put in some twist that made it intriguing to read on. There are a few points that I would like to recommended tidying up (or fix?): 1. The female lead claiming her IQ and/or EQ is low- through out the story, it can be observed that it is not so. Maybe in the first timeline, it can be described as it is, but with the new realm/world, I don't really support this statement anymore. 2. The male lead is too much a blockhead. Please at least put in more effort on his character development. If done so, it might present a more view of "why does the villian need saving". 3. The system or mission overall is not that clear in perspective/its purpose as to why. 4. The first arc's ending. It was too sudden and pretty much disappointing. Even with the death ending, it should have gone to more details as to the how/why of the happening. Overall it is a great read, specially with its long chapters(longer than the regular) and short arcs.😊