Review Detail of Gamehotel in Ghost Knight

I will give myself 2.0 for the following reasons English is not my first language and honestly speaking of the story I'm just going to add it to how it comes to my mind but I try as much as possible to keep it in line I give myself a 1 in character design because I am not a cartoonist and I can not give at least a sketch of my character, maybe in the future I will put some effort into making a decent sketch of his last appearance in evolution and for the background I can not give more than 3 because I will honestly try to do it as detailed as possible in what I write so the reader can understand the surroundings and last but not least the amount of updates vary since sincerely after the work arrived dead XD but still after all that try to improve everything else can thank you for reading :D