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The story is probably the best DxD fanfic but it has a confusing beginning (Which gets less confusing as time goes on) think of this story as the same as DxD but Issei is strong and bad ass with the inclusion of characters from other anime's Now some complaints one thing is the author seems to have a thing/not know how to write a tragic background without the inclusion of rape for instance there are not many OC's (which is fine because if I wanted to have tons of OC's I wouldn't be reading a fan fic) mainly because there all ready are a lot of characters in DxD even without the inclusion of other animes so there isn't much need for them and when they are there they are just throwaway characters but one of the first OC's the MC meets is a big sister willing to trade her life for a pact of revenge you find out she was captured and raped and didn't resist so her little sister could be safe to only find out her sister was raped anyways, Aisha was about to be raped, One of the other few OC's is a mother of a emotionless daughter and will trade her life to make her daughter normal, due to not being able to fix it before the father left and to take care of the daughter the mother was forced to have *** with her boss to keep her job, later you find out the MC had a little sister and guess what she was raped and killed these may not be that many examples but almost every OC with a sad backstory has something to do with forced *** but don't get me wrong i'm not someone who says a story is bad cause it has rape i'm just saying I's prefer not to have every sad backstory that's from a OC to be about forced *** And one last thing I feel the MC's backstory was really forced not as in it was bad but as in not every strong MC needs to have a sad background and someone important he failed to protect to where they stare off into the distance and remember their failures all the comments praised about it being unique or good for character development but I felt it was really unnecessary and cliche it was one of the stories where the character promises to protect someone and doesn't (usually a little girl that calls the MC oniichan or a childhood love interest) complete with flashbacks that go like girl says "Will you always protect me" then MC goes "I'll protect you forever" which he fails to do go figure she gets raped and killed then it goes back to real time where the MC is sad and blames himself for being to weak and you find out that's his main driving force/motivation for his actions

Heroes- A Highschool DxD Fanfction

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I do get you....but the only thing i can say is look forward to memories chapters, that way, you can understand what and how mc, choose the current path he is in

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I will Because like I said it's still the best DxD fan fic I've red and just a good one in general so I'll be looking forward to it.

Leagueoflaugh:I do get you....but the only thing i can say is look forward to memories chapters, that way, you can understand what and how mc, choose the current path he is in