Review Detail of Why_Windows in Tear a Path

TLDR: the novel has smooth grammar really good world building and character development. This story is really good. I feel like it has done several things most novels on webnovel don't do well at. The first is character building because in this story I get a real sense of the characters growth :even though it is a tad unrealistic to go from a modern day youth to what he became so quickly the characters are well defined and the growth doesn't seem arbitrary and just to fuel the story. Not just that but the side characters introduced so far have clearly defined goals and characteristics which is a really nice change compared to being introduced with a few paragraphs of backstory and then making a leap of logic of that being enough to justify all they do. And next comes one of the most enjoyable parts of the story for me, the world building. It's been really good so far even with the system trope because it feels like the system isn't the whole novel which is great. It feels like the system is an aid to getting stronger rather than being the sole reason the character is getting stronger different from what it feels like in a lot of other novels. The world building has been very steady throughout the novel and as we move along in the story we find out more about the world gradually rather than through big info dumps every dozen chapters. Like how we gradually learn about the ecosytems that have been introduced so far and how we learn about the history and background of things through stories that are spread out. It keeps you wanting to read more and learn more about the world the author is creating rather than something just to get out of the way to get to the "real parts" of a novel on webnovel like faceslapping and power tripping. For the grammar there have been a few mistakes but overall you have to go looking for them to find them and there are no glaring mistakes that will deduct from the readability of the story. It feels like a smooth ride throughout grammar wise when reading. Anyway from the wall of text of above the short of it is its a really good novel that I recommend you to read.