Review Detail of HotCheeto in World of Chakra

Item: World of Chakra
Rating: 1.8

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HotCheetoLv145yrHotCheeto

I couldn't understand it at all. Sucky descriptions of characters, bad grammar, bad character development, and wtf do you mean get can talk while being only three years old and everyone acting like he could talk before that.

World of Chakra

FanficMortal

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FanficMortalAutorFanficMortal

My Grammar improved lately you can see if you read my latest chapters. Even in the modern world 3 year old child talks not to mention in immortal world, You can see this type of scenes in desolate era and many other novels.

5yr

Lackada1sicalLv4Lackada1sical

provide concise criticism so that author-san can improve. I hate to point it out but even your grammar and punctuations are inconsistent. kindly reflect ;)

2yr