Review Detail of ThalesChief in Mage System in a Martial World

Man I did not read your novel but I really like the description. But after reading the reviews I noticed that you must have dropped it 3 months ago. I hope you get to improve and try to make this novel from the beggining, your idea is really good. I'll not try to read it thought, don't have much time to read and they said very clearly that for now it's not worth reading. Keep up the good work! Noticed that your native language is not English. Maine you should try to write in your native language and find someone good to translate it for you. Best regards!