Requiem_Phantom

Yeah I think I’m done with this forced bullshit. This all could have been avoided if Mc made better choices and was smarter whatever. I’m dropping.

You know I enjoy this book but so far there are two major problems. One I believe which will probably be fixed over time. The other I’m not sure. For one, Jack needs to grow some balls. I’m getting sick of how he’s been acting but I believe this is all just to show growth so it will probably be handled in time. But the do the roen I’m not sure. To me, Daruun actually takes away from the main character. Idk because of fate and Daruun practically handing plans to Jack, it just makes him not seem special or even talented. He’s just a tool for Daruun to use in his plans. Idk I just guess I was hoping for MC to be kind of badass and smart to where he’s coming up with plans and outsmarting people and achieving things himself instead of it just being fated or being told what to do. He may still have to do the things he is told but it’s a lot easier when the map is laid out for you.

I feel like rogue would be a good choice though maybe not Jean grey. Could have him help rogue find ways to control her powers and whatnot which helps her fall in love or something along those lines.

Ah, a fellow error.

At this rate he will just have a harem of old men lol

Yeah I’m dropping. The system is too much. I mean he is practically a slave to the system. Can’t really get stronger without it nor use anything that didn’t come from the system. It’s too overly reliant on the system. It makes it boring to me. A system should just be a helper, not the everything.

Agh this would have been nice if it wasn’t forced missions. So MC is just system slave. What a waste.

Shouldn’t a universe have planets that are completely water planets?

Nah this is too freaking weird. I’ve never been a fan of clone stuff but tonlieterally amke another you is just to weird for me. Such a waste, I was really enjoying this. I’m done.

Honestly I hope this day thing and someone guiding him along a set path isn’t true and just a feeling. Cause that would completely make it boring and would minimize the emotion behind everything. I mean if it was all fated to happen then why does his choices or actions even matter. I hate stories that rely on fate or destiny for the MC.