Zadenados

it's all MTL, the story has a good flow but it's ruined by the poor translation

probably because you were too busy giving everything an F grade

these stats are horribly wrong. his str was +8 from the lv2 core a few chapters ago?

that, my good sir, was an amazing chapter. well done

pure crack fic, so if you're into that go ahead. weird humor; example, making Asuma be the result of a drunken night with a monkey summon. another being how danzo is written. there's a strange scaling of character strength based on other noteworthy characters from the anime/manga, including kakashi and guy, but he goes from literal civilian to kage in speed-run style making the story feel extremely rushed time wise. didn't really feel much character growth up to when i stopped at chapter 43. good luck to the author and i hope he enjoys his work looking back on it in the future.

the story is ok. there's a lot of obvious mistakes and shorthands that were never really edited to flow better. the chapters feel like they were split to prolong release

throw a smidge more effort into this 'plz'

too much shameless promotion. dropping the story now. good luck.

oh no

why choose midnight.