Muhammad_Umar_2484

I like it, just wished we got more info on some of the stuff he got from the both the gacha or valyria. Like bro looted old valyria and not once was he seen using a valyrian steel sword, shield, or armor. Heck no mention of dragon eggs, tomes, history of old valyrian families and not to mention homie got a 100kg of valyrian steel from the gacha and didn't look for Tobho Mott to forge himself a sword, nor did he use magic to find Blackfyre or other swords like Truth while he was conquering in Essos.

story was really fun at first, but it starts to inconherent as the story progresses. the pacing is off and the dialogue starts to sound like it's coming from AI. the first part of the story doesn't have this issue so I'm assuming he was just cracking under pressure from crowd expectations. whenever a story like this is written and no characters are summoned, that's almost a sure sign that the individual is afraid of writing and maintaining complex characters. the latest 20 chapters are a progressively quick escalation of violence and completion of objectives.