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Nice strategy (Sarcasm) Make it shorter especially when the readers are hungry for it.
Hm... You'll be surprised. Keep reading and enjoy
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You're welcome! This is an image of me using Grammarly. It's like Word's editor, but this one hovers all around your PC. Don't forget to read Chronisoul.
This chapter is one of your strongest emotional and world‑building moments. The illusion of the town’s past, the betrayal, the massacre, and the knight’s terrifying power all hit extremely hard.
This chapter is kinda calmer but also important, because it finally slows down and shows how Tjer’s essence actually works. The “realm” scene is one of your clearest explanations of the magic system so far and it all makes the world feel deeper. I guess it pays off.
Why does he have two types of essence? Is the shadow part the curse or something?
Why does Mim get noble clothes, a bracelet, and supplies but not Tjer? Eden is clearly choosing her for something.
The voice inside Tjer is getting clearer and more emotional, which makes their bond feel real but also dangerous. The pacing is good, and Mim’s innocence mixed with trauma hits hard. That ending was crazy, brutal and shocking in the right way.