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It's fantastic! It's great to see such a powerful hero every now and then. The story is wonderful and has great potential with the addition of gods and other elements. My question for the author is: does the hero hide his strength? I'm only on chapter 20 and I don't want to see a story where the hero is concealing his power.
A truly excellent novel; I didn't expect it to be so wonderful. Author, please don't stop writing this masterpiece!
The novel is really good, but I think the author made a terrible mistake. He forgot about Almond's mother, who was kidnapped by the devil on the third floor. They entered the gloomy world, and the author didn't even mention her. I think he forgot about her.
A truly wonderful and unique novel; the only annoying problem is Kyle hiding his power.I don't mind hiding it from the council and his enemies, but not from his friends. If it goes on for more than 100 chapters, it will become boring, and I think I'll stop reading it.
It's a wonderful novel. The story is good, the protagonist is distinctive, and the world-building is also excellent. I'll review it again after more chapters are released. I hope the author doesn't neglect his first story, as it's truly the best, and that he balances the chapter releases between the two stories.
When will you return to writing novels, author?
Why have chapter downloads decreased so much this week?
It's fantastic that you're releasing two chapters a day; I personally always eagerly await them. Please continue! ❤️💯
It's truly my favorite novel; the story and the protagonist are all brilliantly crafted. I hope there will be some battles or developments in the protagonist's power, as things have become a bit boring after his fight with Kyle.
Honestly, for the first story you wrote, it is more than wonderful. As for the harem topic, I hope that the hero will continue only with Alicia, and if you add one, it will only be Evelyn.More than that and you will lose a lot of readers who hate harems so use the middle ground of only two women, Alicia and Evelyn.