Chigozirim_4854

author I will give you the benefit of doubt and Ad this to my library

this story is still starting but based on your previous works I said that it's good so I will keep it in my library and let it add chapters until it's high enough to binge read so please update quickly and let it be good and don't let other talk you down all right this is a really good story please don't disappoint us

his system is a development type so he had no reason to join Luffy crew like he could have developed a long time gotten new limbs modified himself or someone else have a little bit of reputation look all i am saying is that he could have become independent created his own cyberpunk ship and overtime become stronger but you threw that away I have stopped reading the book because this is not my cup of tea

OK AUTHOR YOUR CHOICE FOR THE BOOK COVER IS BOLD AND I CAN SEE THAT YOU ARE A FELLOW MAN OF CULTURE 😈I WILL PUT THIS IN MY LIBRARY UNTIL FURTHER CHAPTERS

ok guys let's give him a chance don't drop the book and we good and everyone is happy

the book is a hidden gem 💎 honestly although the only problem is the issue with your words like example you leave a minor line and then write his plan and then explain and another one his reputation soars and then his reputation exceeded hashirama senju pls stop it because it breaks the flow and immersion I don't know if it's because you are using AI but please proof read the book 😄

I like the book and it's flow of the words but recently you have started using ai or not I don't know but the mistake is that there's a small line and then words like comfort and then in the next line he hugs her no words said please stop it it breaks the immersion but overall the book is solid good job author 😁

to me the interaction with other characters is forced he had no need to meet bat man so early the way you try to force the mystery atmosphere the more choppy the flow and the less people are interested In the dialogue and there is too little info on the mc in short you have a lot of improvement to make

all right mate I give you a chance impress me

I haven't read it yet but no offense but it sounds like mental agony if the level of denseness if even remotely true then the person who decides to read it better have near infinite patience and an immunity to pathological density of that scale good luck fellow cultivator on your journey if you survive this ordeal and come out the other side the we must find some time to exchange tips and contacts good luck on your journey 😇