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Author here. I think I was influenced while reading some top novels and adapted their style of writing. It’s really different from my first book, but I think it’s better... though, it's much slower because of the focus on grounding instead of just filling your mind with imagination.
I wouldn't get your hopes up about this. My goal is to improve my writing style. Even though I've finished the world-building and outline, right now, this is just for fun.
It has been almost two months since I started this novel. Two volumes finished so fast with few chapters... I do not even know if I am doing it right. But I know one thing: I am improving... So what to expect in the third volume? I will try to minimize ellipses and those two dashes--to use "—", and better construction of sentences. So basically, I will adjust my writing style.
hmmm how to say... its when the Narration ended with "Like... slaves." then the MC gave context of it, making him aware of the Narration... aware of the story.
step sister :)
This is the one of the best smut? or no? well anyways... the story is good, you will never find someone like Sparx... either the MC or the Author itself... its Divine Feel for me. Every chapter is a Masterpiece of his past, for its very name was the version of himself improving! Now I'm in 1.2.5 Version of the Author!! and can't wait for more!!!
Hello! :) Thank you for the review and your feedback. This story is very much a reflection of my own storytelling style, which prioritizes the integrity of the world and its characters above all else. It might not be for everyone, and that's okay. My greatest hope is that it finds its way to the readers who will connect with it most. Thanks again for reading!
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