LeoLion

Sort of 😂

It's a popular children's song. The MC said it to troll Johnny

Waiting for your review on my work 😁

I like the name of the brother, Kade. It sounds the same to mine, which is Kael. Anyways, The Writing Quality is great, not wordy, not overly explaining, great to read, os 5 stars. Stability of Updates 5. Story Development 5. The Story Development I'm debating between 4 and 5, but I'll give five anyway. I need more chapters to give an accurate remark, but so far, the progress is great. It flows nicely, and the intent of the MC clearly fits right with the development. Character Design 5. World Background 5. I was thinking of giving it a 4, but it would be unfair since it's only because you need to release more chapters so that I can get a picture of the world. Because right now I'm thinking like Jujutsu Kaisen or like an advanced civilization type of world. IDK if I'm correct or if the world is actually like our present, minus the fact that people have powers here. Overall, great read, highly recommended!

It's my first time reading a story like this, so I'm a bit unfamiliar with how I should rate it. I'm afraid I can't give a five-star review, though. But still, I'm sure of one thing. The way you wrote the story is so interesting. I like it. I highly recommend that people read it. Writing Quality, I gave 4 star, it needs some improvement like to separate whenever the system throws a message so that readers don't get confused if its an inner monologue, a description, or something of that sort. Stability of Updates 5. Story Development is 5, it's super-duper good, it's progressing well. Character Design is 5, the MC is well-written, and so is the other female character. World Background is 5, even though there are a lot of unfamiliar words that I don't get and can't imagine. But still, with a few searches here and there, I understand. And it would be unfair if I gave a low rating just because of that.

Idk if this is necessary, but I'm going to say it anyway. Why not make this part unique? Like <<Warning: Threadsignature Rebbot Imminent!>>. Just a suggestion.

So deep

Damn! Such a great read!

nvm, I searched it

What is a loom?