Zombieshing

It's a pretty good story, full of action and comedic moments, quite gory actually. The grammer is quite good, and I'am surprise that starting from chapter 1 to the other chapters, the story kept on having a pretty good hook.

Author can you please stop adding some edgy lines at almost every end of a chapter, it's the same with your first novel. The story is still pretty good tho just reduce the edgy and cringy lines, thank you.