7empest_5teele

23 chapters in and the protagonist is THREE YEARS OLD!!!!! Oh he might be FIVE, if i missed it! The LITERAL CHILD is getting STRONGER, because he needs to GET STRONGER, when he GETS STEONGER, then he will BE STRONGER, yet he will still need to BE STRONGER than his STRONGER currently is! Can you GUESS. WHAT. WORD. IS. FCKING. SPAMMED.???

Yay 2 WHOLE YEARS!! Now Quit SPAMMING the fcking word STRONGER!!!

No that name is almost as bad as naming him HORSESHIIT!

Jesus fcking MURPHY!! MAKE UP YOUR GODDAMN MIND!! He is worthless and is goig to vulnerable recycled, so DO IT ALREADY!

Alright I fcking love this girl!

So ALL. OF. THIS. BUSHIIT. was a clear and present waste of fcking DIALOGUE??

Fireball solves ALL!!

Nice. The Author used the noble title of VON over the cliche VAN, which is just an area, ir insignificant passing name.

We gotta get stronger and fcking TRASH, over and over again, like those are the only words to describe MANY things. How about using a gkddamn THESAURUS? Oh apparently you will even have to look THAT word up! What a waste of fcking time this bullshiit novel was. Maybe in the future learn how to write WITHOUT the dozen repeadative fcking Cliches!

GARBAGE, REFUSE, STEAMING PILE OF DOGSHIT, SCUMBAG, LOWLIFE, DIRTBAG, WEASEL, VERMIN, DISCARDED WASTE. Looooooook at how many WORDS I can use to replace the SPAMMED FCKING WORD "TRASH"!!!!!!!??? Now quit being a lazy fcking "Writer" and develop some CREATIVITY, AND IMAGINATION!!