Syndicus

How could he get into nether, when he does not have diamonds? He cannot mine obsidian for the gate...

I am sorry, theme is interesting, but creative mode is killing it from the start, there is no suspense, even I, as not native english speaker, can see that writing quality is quite poor. Starting as Dothraki is in my opinion rather difficult and you failed to make it truly realistic. Integrating with and leading culture like that just demands more chapters in the beginnig, more inner conflicts and so on. I tried to continue reading, but fall of Astapor was the end for me. Just spawning villagers like robots who know what to do just kills the fic. Thank you for contributing, but this will never be a good fic.

I did not know that, I read for years only on AO3, fanfiction.net and spacebattles. This is one of the first chinese fics I saw, so I was curios.

I have to say that this fic got me immediately and I read it all in just a few days. The only thing I did not like was occasional time skiping. I also noticed that author did not elaborate in some instances and later just returned with one or two senteces. Big thanks to translator, you are great.

It is not bad. It has good idea, I loved that and the first half was quite good, but there are issues, like chinese names for westerosi locations, different titlest than in canon etc. In the second half I feel like it has moved on from Westeros to real world and sending money to some girls online just for watching videos... I do not like reading that.