Lindsey_Karagoz

ending was lacking after such a wonderful build up in the story

I will continue to say it the story line has taken a major shift to the point it doesn't make sense anymore, regretting spending money on supporting this authors story

What is happening to the story line? this app is expensive to read authors work and I would have nevered pay money for a book that doesn't make sense

I'm so confused this chapter seems like a whole new story line compared to the last chapter?

again backpack, this is probably the 4 or 5th time

Do you mean *Pack not backpack? I suggest reading through the last few chapters and making the necessary edits. This app is expensive for books that have poor editing

a good author keeps us on the edge of our seats! you're amazing 👏 always prefer a happy ending though! can't wait to finish this story, manifesting it coming to print!!!!

sure hope he doesn't break Zara's heart, it would be a very shitty shift in this amazing story 😕😡

ahh ok well let's get you to the top!!!

now my end is showing 272 and 273 is the same chapter