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308 "Who would think this was the same girl that heartlessly cut off the dick of one of her guards without even flinching a month ago? pretty fucked up love story character
125 the mom is the stupidest char in the story "i want you to not train" "feels guilt for always being a trash person preventing his training" yet does it anyway even after realizing fucking finally that if he doesnt train he wouldve died already and still might. its not like the world is at war or anything right??? thats sarcasm cause the world is at war. the chi chi syndrome
they often start with the dreaded "for example" and then after a page of word salad its *** three dots ending it and im like fcking stop that please
1. calling rape bullyng is fcking weird 2. in a story where its taught repeatedly to not leave any enemies behind the MC constantly leaves loose ends (the gang of torturers, the reporter, the chi family guy, those mad at him after 128 hell buss etc etc) 3. being able to take stuff out of realms and having a giant space to do so but not doing it except for 1 potion... is fcking weird.. a lotta free sht not getting stored 4. it does not state if the rainbow portal prop was retrieved after the biohazard event...
none of the promises made in ch 41 were ever fulfilled that i can find pretty much no point in reading a story where the author has the mc an friends swear to stop the murdering rapist necorphile child abuser than they just forget about him and the other bad guys..... the child marriage was creepy but tge way you treat the dude forced into it is quite awful the lack of brain power even after boosting the int stat i fcking cant with this bs
"Although that weird mind mage was at fault for rioting his emotions. But the words were his." something he is supposed to be immune to
shouldve put the loot dividing before the torin walt sht no ones gonna care bout it now, now anything else till torin ghost and the slavery business is taken care of... also a room full of powerful people and none can sense ghosts ability im calling bullsht
the mc gets worse the author gets off on rape, child rape, gore and such dont expect it to get better
when you stop getting off to writing about raped dead babies then preach you wrote 2 or 3 into your story slave pins, the knight called terry and the only reason i can think of is you have very dark desires....
the author has an odd obession with punishing innocents slowly but bad guys quickly if at all (usially not) also multiple chapters of raped and dead babies no im not joking