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  • M7md_Star
    M7md_Star2 hours ago
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    honestly as short as it was i really enjoyed it was like 20 chapters long but to me it felt like 100 chapter tho the ending did frustrate me from like 2 to 3 days so 8 thought of asking you if i could continue it myself iIknow iImay not be qualified at all to write a sequel especially that i would not write the sequel as the original author intended and as things stand now i dont think the author is coming back for this so if you could let me write a sequel for it it would really be appreciated

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    M7md_Star4 days ago
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    here is a review since there isn't many here so honestly speaking this good no like excelent good just good maybe very good you nailed the the story development and character development the story wasn't like it forced us concentrate on someone only but decided it attention to every body the interaction are pretty smooth even introductions are good so after all that I'd say it's a solid 4

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    M7md_Star5 days ago
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    I don't know but i feel like your going to recreate gojo vs sukuna in the fanfic between kurokai and mechamaru

  • M7md_Star
    M7md_Star6 days ago
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    this the the most well written ff i ever read unless another one is released this will at the top of my list this was a roller coaster to say the least the story was smooth the character development was apparent i just didn't really like that you abondoned the idea of writing more about the fairy tail world but its kind of understand you killed off the final boss if the entire thing early so yeah and i didnt Really like that you gave important characters no screen time at all like the original set of protagonists really became just background characters like natsu ,Lucy, gray,luxas and etc and you Really didn't do an epilogue it would have been nice to have one but all in all it was an excellent read to be honest so in my book that's 5 stars

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    M7md_Star11 days ago
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    honestly it's a solid ff i can't really say anything bad about is except that character development with the other characters is slow barely even noticable

  • M7md_Star
    M7md_Star12 days ago
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    well yea this review is pretty self explanatory I just think this ff is bland and unoriginal and not in any way entertaining you focused way too much on useless day to day things in your chapter so why even bother enrolling him in ua why bother writing this just right a slice of life or something

  • M7md_Star
    M7md_Star18 days ago
    respondió a Delusion10

    hey dude do u still want to write this ff or did you give it up cause I am interested in writing about it

  • M7md_Star
    M7md_Star18 days ago
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    ok let's get this out of the way here this the most confusing ff i have ever read it had a really Really good idea but your execution was all over the place the mc character traits are unkown the development is unknown i dont even know where you were heading with any of this actually bro you had a really good idea why didn't you take advantage of it and i think that you leaned on the backroom part more than actual the mha part there was practically no development with any character other than the mc it seemed like you made everyone a background character that doesn't talk or have personality at all and dude your transitions are confusing my suggestion give the idea to someone else and start a whole new ff to right about the backrooms entirlely

  • M7md_Star
    M7md_Star20 days ago
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    i just can't say it anything but that its one of the best if not the best written mha ff like you really satisfied everything iIwanted to see even tho sometimes you actually forgot some character like all might for example or nezu but iIguess they served there purpose in the story so iIcant blame you for not adding them again i was so used to weird mha ff that i actually forgot what a well written one looks like even the introduction was great real great

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    M7md_Star24 days ago
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    well how should I start first i thought that the story was interesting interesting characters and other things but then the author changed some characters genders and iIwas ok with that but then he changed how the story went then it came falling if you going to change everything so drastically put a disclaimer first or do an original fanfic we are here read about mha not whatever you thought was ok