Jack_D_Ellwyn

Author here, legitimate concerns. Allow me to explain. 1. It takes places in a different world, mainly Avalon, a mythical land which is supposed to be the origins of magic. 2. Hogwarts hasn't been founded yet, as this is an origins story. 3. Godric isn't riding on the Hogwarts Express, as I said, Hogwarts hasn't been founded yet. 4. I didn't say that Godric's sword IS the sword of Gryffindor. A lot will be explained as the story progresses but it'll eventually tie back into canon.

Thanks for the review and I'm glad you've been enjoying it. I know I'm rusty when it comes to writing, and I do my best to proofread as I do not have an editor. Nevertheless, I'm always looking to improve. Most of all, I write for those with a love for stories.

Hope you're liking it so far. Do drop me a review telling me what you think. There's still many more chapters to come.

Nope, he won't get it until later.

Straight forward story with a straight forward premise. Good build up to the story and a rather interesting hook. I'd look forward to more updates.

A lead in to your standard rich guy good girl romance story. It's up to a very good start. Plot is consistent and the characters are relatable.

It has a promising premise with a nice slow burn and introduction to the story and the world. A little bit of input, hit the accelerator a little more on the plot because it's moving a little too slow, especially with the characters. Will like to see more soon.

Setting looks good and the story is off to good start. Might want to spend more time with the character descriptions, but maybe I'm just old school that way. Keep at it.

Still a little to early to give a full review but it's off to a good start and has the makings of your standard mob hero in a world he doesn't want to be in. Word of advice, might want to pump the breaks on the plot a little bit. Let us get to know the character a little more. Otherwise, it's going great.

We seem to be off to a very good start though you might want to take more time to develop some of the character relationships. You've got the concept down, just let it simmer a little more.