Vlad_6413

Awesome start. Hope for quite a lot more chapters.

calling people out while being on this site and reading fanfic. go look in the mirror you sad excuse. Tell yourself you are better maybe you will even start believing it.

Thanks man, coudnt remember the name but yes it could not be more obious.

The story is really held back by MC being OP right from start. No real progression or interesting fights.

Dont want to judge but bro, who hurt you? Just how can you see anything good here?

wrong chapter

This is just Bad. The first two chapters are already ridiculous. He blackmails Hashirama and Tobirama with Nawakis dead and after doing nothing about it they are just like meh shit happens. The next thing he decides to do is show Tsunade his Mangekyou just so he can go to war. For no reason. And that all while he is 8 years old.

I have no problam with harem stories but why make MC a scumbag. Otherwise the story seems good but that really takes it down for me.

Not really. At lease not in a way that would make it problematic for me personally. Give it a try.

Dont take reviews about MC seriosly. He is definately selfish and uses everyone but that becomes less so when he gets his crew. Also that doesnt make MC unlikable. Just dont read this when you are into heroic type protagonists. The story itself is quite entertaining so far.