Daoist_XenShi

TFTC

To be fair I can't judge the book that much currently as there isn't enough chapters to make a full review for it, but for the sake of chapters I'll make do with what there is. The 1st chapter is quite interesting though I'd like if we were informed more of their world and maybe made it into 2 or 3 chapters to add more suspense and details about the MC's world and how stuff really happened but it is what it is. After that, things are going nicely. Writing quality isn't the best of the best but it's definitely good, some mistakes here and there. Story is developing decently for it's pace. Character design, not enough details or info but he was a bádass on the 1st chapter as the [REDACTED] [REDACTED] [REDACTED] (Nuh uh, I'm not going to spoil it, you'll have to try the book for yourself) and with him becoming Ultron I'm sure there'll be more bâdass forms and alike. Update frequency, very very bountiful especially if the readers unite and hit the goal for an additional chapter. Though I'd like if the chapter didn't use some of the paragraphs of the previous chapter being added on the newer chapter after it to fill up word count. Overall, this is a great fanfic. I'm sure it'll turn out great and better in the future. Can recommend reading.

Tyftc