SourBug

Has anyone else privileged chapters stopped? Since Jan 11, I haven’t been able to pass ch 307. Any tips? It shows there are 322 chapters.

I read the entire story. I enjoyed the storyline, but it lacked details. The characters were consistent and built their background stories to keep you hooked. Again, details could have been better. I would have liked to feel more emotion with the story telling. Some of the descriptions were awkward, such as saying he poked her head often. Some of those could have been emotional provoking and intimate with the characters rather than sounding like an awkward touch. Some chapters have a sudden scene change without indication. I didn’t get the feel that the characters were intimate throughout the story because nothing was indicated that they were sexual with each other than once and ‘maybe’ a second time. The very ending with Connor’s thoughts would have been perfect had the story had that emotional aspect the entire time.

Why did it unlock the same privilege chapters as yesterday?! I’ll never know the story at this rate. [img=Your move]

I hope he doesn’t ruin it. [img=Speechless] Waiting 24 hrs for more content to be unlocked is killer.

Just the standard option of chapters. Most of the novels I’ve read only use 1FP or 10-12 coins. This novel requires 2FP or 20 coins. It keeps me from really going further.

Great story line with minor grammar errors. Updating and cost is much higher than other similar books. As much I enjoy reading and want to continue that deters me from wanting to continue.

Great start to the story and laying out the characters. Haven’t completed yet.

The story is much better than I initially thought. The story progresses in the right pace. If there was a way to complete the story without having to be prestigious then I’d probably buy the rest as well. I can’t wait to see the (what I’m assuming) battle between Aria and Swan. How Gale hasn’t pieced together his puzzle yet baffles me but it keeps the story interesting. [img=update][img=Feeling it]

Wolf not wife

He asked Lily***