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I hope Leylin kills Zeoticus in the most painful and worst way possible because there isn't anything likable about Mc's character, not even a single point. Additionally, the plot is inconsistent, and the power levels keep becoming unstable.

Update stability is great, but every other aspect of this story is terrible, especially the plot. The Mc awakens his system, although I am disappointed at how unimaginative it is, I can overlook it. The Mc comes to Kuoh academy? Although it is an overused plot, I want to give it the benefit of the doubt. However, when the Mc prevents Kuoh academy from becoming a co-ed school and becomes the only male student there, it is the worst plot you can pull. Why did he do that and how did he do that? Is he trying to pull this in order to be a harem king or something?

What are you talking about? Riser literally stole Issei's mother and prevented him from being born by impregnating her. Now, Miki is planning on joining with her daughter to seduce Riser, who is her own father... Wow, that's disgusting.

I am surprised that such a disgusting fanfic managed to score so high. It is just another generic harem and god complex fanfic with no creativity, generic, one-sided and self-centred as hell. It is super childish and reads as if it was written by a child author.

They named a boy Vivian?!

I'm wondering if the main character will only attract girls who are already yandere from the start, or if he has the ability to turn normal girls into yanderes.

What can I say? It looks like haters gonna hate. This idea actually uses the original protagonist to full potential instead of wasting him, so I kind of like it.

Yeah, you know the drill - it's another story where the protagonist helps Rias, bashes Issei, kills him, and then steals the Boosted Gear. It's all so predictable.

I think Mc isn't the sanest person in the first place, the dude is insane.

This fanfic is full of overused, cringe-worthy self-insert tropes, lacking originality. The important male characters have been changed into female characters to simply add to the author's harem. Those male characters who remain either end up dying in a VERY tragic manner or serve as the main character's minions. It's clear that the author doesn't prioritize coherent storytelling and instead focuses on adding characters to the harem under predictable and simplistic circumstances. The character deaths are portrayed in a tasteless manner, making the overall story a disappointment."