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The story is good however it is already being translated on this platform by Dreamer_20 it is called Harry Potter: The Vampire Prince. the translation is good so I don't really see any reason why people should read this translation when another one is 60+ chapters ahead.

I don't not like it there is certainly a lot of stuff that is better but like I am not going to complain so over the top about it after all there is even more stuff that is worse.

I have been following it on patreon till now will probably stay there but I came over here to leave a review. The start of this story till now has been pretty great and very engaging I am very curious how this will proceed and the author also seems pretty passionate about this story.

Really great story I like most stories written by starwaves they are pretty much always fairly solid with very few exceptions.

The first 11 chapters were very nice so far and the author has shown great quality in past stories as well so I am fairly positive that this will be a great ride.

Till now it has been pretty solid. The update stability is non existent but still better than many others.

I second this some fictions have insanely huge harems where I sometimes even forget who is in it. I think 3-5 is really the sweet spot it can still be called a harem but it is still not too many.

I really enjoy your story but you should be careful about letting rolls build up. Some other stories have the same issue where they have to roll like a hundred+ items or skills and then half the chapter is just a info dump. I personally would prefer if the roll sizes wouldn't be much more than 50 and don't let her build up too many either.

Pretty solid I haven't found many good cultivation crossovers into the Harry Potter universe yet so this is interesting. It is also multicross with atleast Marvel I guess which adds a little extra spice to it because honestly the level of enemies in Harry Potter is not that impressive compared to many other franchises, and due to the fact that she is already one of the strongest in the wizarding world at 11 the story could become boring fast without the higher power ceiling that is in the Marvel universe so I appreciate it.

Awesome start I am really stoked to see how this will continue.