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Juvie, so max 21, probably 18 (and high school diploma prob made in there)

Read none of this. Do AUX chapter asap. Why does it tagged in 'ff - movies' ? Is it based on a movie? movies? why not tag it as 'music'... Writer, write synopsis, write aux chapter, c'mon, info. why did you write 100 chapters without correcting the description yet?

If you're the protagonist I guess we're in a chinese novel by the amount of face-slap. I think if you wanna diss this book ya got to do it in rap. Look at the words I'm writing - Yeah, it's Black. I guess this sh!t went too far but damm I ain't comin' back.

I put my hands on the desk, fingers laying on the keyboard keys, pressing key after key after key, creating a sentence, and behold, before I knew it, another sentence appeared before me, and another, and another, and before I knew it, a paragraph, with a mixture between the viscosity of life and the annoyance of uselessness, appeared on the flickering screen [+add the screen company, serial number, year, and user guide book etc.]. If you didn't survived the last over-textual-annoying paragraph = this ff ain't for you. the writing style is a bit better then reading an app 'user disclaimer' before activating, but pretty much the same interest level. MC at ch.1 described as 'young master' from chinese novel (I think the whole ff based on chinese novel, so don't be surprised) ; ch.2 he transform to a dime-philosopher ; ch.3 as snotty-brat ; ch.4 just scrambled eggs ; ch.5 an ignorant coward ; ... Anyway, as always, writers take a human being and ignore the fact they did so, creating a new character (just to give mc the knowledge of the future, fr, just give him the option to see the movies/comics or smth. Why reincarnate him if you're going to butcher him?) Honestly, it's as if the writer of this ff never read a book in his life. The writing style is so over exaggerated, like if it's the opposite side of the MTL - he word out every useless thing so clearly that my brain refused to keep reading this, almost brain dead after 20k words. imo, ff and even all artworks at webnovel, are LIGHT-novel, who suppose to be LIGHT, as flowing, easy to read, fun, immersive .. This ff here is as if you write a classic novel that goes to a museum. Unfit to this site.

summary: ch.1 = young master playboy ; ch.2 = philosopher ; ch.3 = snot-boy who wish to be a hero and save the world from all diseases. hahhhh.. here comes ch.4 :x

I guess he's a snotty boy, as he have that much snot, but only 'a lone tear escaped his eye' :d

I actually went for humor, but honestly? it's a religious thing, as they're talking about priest and such. ... At a serious note - Equality always assume certain topics, such as 'opportunities', 'rights', etc. That never meant to include 'total equality', so I guess the loose term is confusing (can a child and old be equal? can man and woman? Do they even wanna be equal? ... That's why this term of 'equality' is much narrower than people imagine it to be in reality)

Go to church, boy, let us read this ff quietly. I doubt you'll find Jesus in here, maximum Odin or Zeus.

The uncanny, overly sophisticated wording, made me feel like you try to enlighten the reader of something (which I didn't get). On the other hand - the use of the simple word, 'Wish', was so wrong, so annoying, that I doubt you used a dictionary. I'll keep going cause I see you put the effort, but I do hope for a change farther ahead :/ [.. From obnoxious 'young master'/'playboy' in ch.1 ..to a philosopher without memories in ch.2 ..I Wonder which MC will be in the next chapter:]

Let's skip the overused Aladdin' trope of '3 wishes' - Do you even know the definition of the word 'Wish' ? (& if it was suppose to be in humor, then it went horribly bad)