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Although it starts off a little slow (I have to admit I had a bit of difficulty getting into it because of the rather cliche and unrealistic way in which the personality of the main character is framed), once the story gets going it is really phenomenal. The characters have a remarkable depth and the action scenes are gripping and full of suspense. The contrast between the two main characters keeps the dialogue engaging and I love that there is a cute little puppy included. I've read the first half of what has been published, and my favourite parts so far have been chapters 4, 8 and 9. I think the narrative technique of switching back and forth between when Holden was a boy, and the current storyline, keeps the storytelling dynamic and fresh while moving the action along at a pace which is guaranteed to make you want more. I would recommend this story to any anime enjoyers out there who harbour a bit of morbid curiosity, because it's a really intriguing blend of styles from both anime and horror which manages to make you really feel for the characters. I especially enjoyed the fight scene with the doll-cryptid, and the way in which Holden defeated it was well thought out and intellectually satisfying. Keep up the great work Frozen!

This was my favourite chapter so far.