Golden_Chalice

Awesome a new story from the esteemed author of reverend insanity, haven't started reading but i do think it won't disappoint. Just hope Mc won't be evil like fang yuan.

This is my first work, so I am expecting to learn a lot from this experience. If you like the novel, please leave a review; it helps me out a lot. Thanks 

Nice 3rd chapter, try describing the environment more. the pacing is a bit fast.

I have only read about three chapters, but things are building up quite nicely, maybe when I have read more I might change my mind. You could get a bit more creative when describing certain actions and the surroundings of your world.

You could get more creative when speaking about the protagonist, you could say his name instead of always using I.

Not bad.