animanovalux

I like a lot, how you write, and you are forming the plot, and speaking of plot, the waifu is powerful, and Kiyen I like her way of being. A very entertaining systems novel, keep it up, with love Eme

Es peor que eso

Y muchos más que varios de los personajes juntos

Pensar que ese ser, existió en la vida real

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Si los dos eran horripilantes manera de morir, aunque la del maquillaje creo que era mucho peor, sobretodo si habia reaccion alergica

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Of course, comment freely.

Okey, I am open to advice, write, it would be helpful.

Definitely the story is interesting, I highly recommend reading, I hope it continues quite well as it goes for now, I hope a lot in the future, very good start.