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I'd like to see a rendition of what her transformed looks like. Does she still have a human face? Or is it like the demons from warhammer?
Jeong Suhan is gonna narrowly escape with his life, isn't he?
The Germans are dwarves
I think for these POV and scene changes, that you might want to put a break in between the paragraphs such as ... or ---
She needs to realize that she IS the villain and that's why she's turning into a demon
You'd think they'd question her horns lmao. Also the name "The Kingdom of Gamers" makes me believe that they are ruled by 4channers
Darn, I love kingdom building, and I would've loved to see more of this empire being built from scratch in more detail. Such as her methods of gaining her supporters, how she consolidated her land, and her daily life as an empress.
It's been enjoyable, but I feel like the past few chapters were rushed a bit
Sheesh, some people would pay money to receive that sort of treatment!
This smells... like a red flag to me