Gon_6888

It wouldn't make sense to delete the comments with criticisms, and there is still the comment that says it is mediocre, I did not correct this paragraph because I don't know what is wrong. Also, I can't delete the reviews.

Mmm, I think you got something wrong, I didn't delete the criticisms, what happens is that when I correct a dialogue or a word all the comments in the paragraphs are deleted, if you see several of my comments, I accept any criticism, and I never delete the comments, I think I'm mentally fine, but thanks for worrying. Then I'm correcting the thoughts and the dialogues, slowly but I've already corrected some. 🫂( tg)

I'm correcting it

If it's wrong, I'll correct it, but, wouldn't it be, (us?) because the heroes are a group, and he let them win, and if I'm wrong, tell me, now I'm correcting the first chapters. thanks 🫂

Because, a person has to die to be reincarnated, and it is not right that the answer is dying, and people with depression or low self-esteem think that the answer is dying to be happy. I don't know if it is prohibited, but Chinese authors prefer to say that they are time travelers. That was an answer from a Chinese author, I don't know if everyone thinks like that.

Not completed

A little late, but now I'm correcting those chapters, I was going to ask you, do you remember from which chapter to which were those errors? I know they are at the beginning but I want to know if it was from 1 to 100 or 1 to 120.

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bad translation , What do you mean? Bad writing, grammatical error, or details like the thought ' ', or all of them?

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