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Brother, that's Naruto's wife, don't let the hero steal her

Man you read my mind

I agree with you, the Chinese make a lot of effort, but the quality of their work is not good even though they consume ideas..

Looking forward to the next chapter [img=angry][img=gift]

OhI should have expected this. There aren't many authors who focus on forgotten and oppressed characters like future Gohan, unfortunately, and I'm a bit lazy to write a novel haha.😓

I have nothing to say. It is a great novel in many respects. At this time, when good novels are few, I will say that it is a very good novel, and I hope you will complete it. Thank you for this greatness. ❤

Beerus' power is much greater. Try to make the balance of power more logical. Focus on the fact that Whis can destroy a timeline, and this was mentioned in the manga. + Also focus on the fact that the seventh universe and other universes are infinite in size, and there is evidence for this. + Also focus on the other characters. You are somewhat unfair to Vegeta. Trunks does not have Vegeta’s desire or desire and focused on Piccolo. Focusing on Gohan only makes the novel a bit unentertaining and predictable. + Do not just follow the anime. Try adding arcs of your own. + Try to increase the power and make it logical, while the God of Destruction, who has been living for millions of years, has his power. It is certainly difficult to reach it, not just to make it stronger. Thank you, please improve it +Also, the universe in Dragon Ball is divided into four parts, the northern galaxy.... It is said that it is only a galaxy that is only a part of the universe consisting of infinite galaxies + alternate dimensions are a reality in DB and have been mentioned several times.

The character of the hero is annoying + your focus should be on one world only. The step of bringing in the Second Hokage is a wrong idea currently. The hero’s development is too fast + the hero hiding his strength made me annoyed = Please improve it, perhaps return the old man to his world.

Man, he looks like a woman, add some muscles or masculine features like Toji [img=strong][img=strong]

Are you serious about writing this garbage?????