Emeka_Nwana

as far as yu understood what i said there is no problem english teacher

don’t misunderstand your fanfic has potential but it has a tendency to become boring if you want more people reading this you gotta simplify it because not much people are fully novel. readers to be intrigued by your writing

it’s not an original novelty dumbass it’s just like what ifs dere is depth and dere is doing too much the author is doing too much makes people lose interest quickly

u dumb moron a fanfic is not areal novel u know it’s not called novel it’s called fan fiction and yes we don’t need in depth explanation or grammar just writing the line would be enough

it’s shortening u dumbass and wat i mean is he is copying the way the main author wrote his novel he starts explaining the feelings too in depth this is a fanfic not a novel

dissapointed had potential mitch i thought he would return right after shibuya hide his identity dat means no limitless and use his swordsmanship and haki to fight other soccerersbe mysterious strong person and make an entrance before his cousin is killed

i am very disappointed with how dis novel ended like dissapointed is even a small word dis ending was shit this had hot potential 😔

y author y did u fuck up this masterpiece

author killed story vibe could have left her in her world and say he would return

this is annoying rn bro even tho ur stronger than noir he won’t behave like this unless u interest him