Kalyan_9245

like why Dave why not any other name available any Japanese would have auited better than Senju Dave

I mean in the first chapter it was referenbed that aemond was viserys's first child with alicent and there is that random shadiws of past, what shadows of past are you even talking about, all of a sudden he becomes a second son

didn't you write in the previous chapter that aemonds was king viserys's first child with alicent I'm confused now.

Just some questions, 1. Why and how do the starks and North know about others and long night? at least from what I know they are folk tales for them at this point of time. 2. Why would Catelyn would even belive that others exist? She is a fully and is from South and hardly would belive about the others and other northern folk tales. Your writing and grammar is really good compared to the other fics, but is missing some context like the above questions on others. I hope you will not take my comments in a negative fashion