Odd_Individual

Ok, so far, this looks good. It's well-written, enjoyable, and a very interesting crossover.

It started off strong but lost its spark as it went on. Letting people vote to decide what path the protagonist took really hurt the flow, as a cohesive narrative needs clear intent, not a mix of competing ideas. Additionally, the harem dynamic doesn’t fit here. I’ll admit I’m biased, as I’m not a fan of harem stories in general, but even without that, it feels out of place in this setting. Still, even after all of that, it’s not that bad just somewhere in the middle. Not good, not bad

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Not gonna say its a bad thing tho, actually I hope it happens more in the future

I was reading this, and this chapter just spawned from nowhere 🗿

Bro, no way you just said that (Facts tho)

I usually dont review stuff, but after finally having the free time to read the last 5 chapters , I can only say 1 thing. THIS IS PEAK.

The first chapter was enough to turn me off; the protagonist receives everything he needs without effort, and the writing quality is poor.

Frankly, I feel that this history would be stronger without a harem. A harem is something complicated to execute correctly and can negatively impact the story if misused. There are cases where the story has a well-executed harem, but they are few. In many cases, it is used by less experienced writers who are not proficient in romance to avoid it and instead focus more on the main storyline, which is not necessarily negative. Additionally, it's important to consider that there is a portion of people on 'WebNovel' who dislike the harem tag. I must admit that I am one of them. As a final point, in the event that you do decide to make it a harem, please do so sparingly. Some people overdo it, large harems can make character development difficult.