WRizz1

Thanks for the Review, as for your concerns, I hope it‘ll be better as I go on, I am still sort of new to writing but thanks anyway.

My fault, I‘ll correct it.

Firstly, he has the six eyes, secondly, he has trained both physically and magically and so is very attuned to sensing things and presences, lastly, as you read on, things will start to unravel and make more sense as you go (hopefully). This was one of my first stories I wrote and I tried things out, so keep this in mind.

Gracias por su comprensión, espero que disfruten de la historia a medida que avance.

Sabo is a girl here, her name is Ann.

Gracias por la crítica, pero soy bastante nuevo en esto de escribir historias, llevo algo más de dos meses en esto y, por supuesto, no soy el mejor. Además he tenido una semana de exámenes diarios, me he sacado aún más de la Práctica, gracias de nuevo, intentaré mejorar mi habilidad escribiendo.

Not anymore, and I have plans for the two he’s got…

Keep reading and You wil see how good it gets, even without Nika.

Quite the sharp tongue you have there, why bother write a review like that if you yourself are incapable of doing it better? Words can be hurtful and while I myself am unbothered by your crude comment, This might not be like that with others. Leave constructive criticism behind, not insults.

Well, I’ve had some liberties with that, if you will, just read on and you’ll see.