Lema404

ugh author made the mc an idiot. killing danzo should have been a priority when he found out that the hokage was supposedly killed.

Ugh. Athos entire chapter reads like a chinese cultivation story, with all the BS and everything. I'm out. see ya.

The author wasn't kidding when they said the story was slow. The pacing is slow to the point that absolutely nothing is pushing the plot forward in the entire fifty-two chapters. Having to wait four plus months to get the same amount of chapters only for very little to happen, or even nothing is a bit much. If this was a completed story, there wouldn't be a problem because usually something decently big has to happen for the story end and regardless of how many boring chapters happen, the author HAS to push the story forward at some point to bring it to a close. This is not the case. While the story is interesting, it's not interesting enough. Add the slowness of the plot with the other issues, and you get a good story that turns sour due to bad decisions.

I would die a happy man to go to a bar/restaurant like this 😆 .

deep fried gator is awesome 👌 😆 especially with a good batter and spicy sauce to go with it.

hey author. are you actually going to reply to our posts, or just like every few posts, regardless of what is said. I gave my honest feedback on what could be done to make the story better, and all I got back in reply is a like? Do you actually care or not what people say about your stories?

All the people who say "NO YURI IN THE HAREM" are idiots and have. A. never had sex with a living woman irl, and doesn't understand what the word ACTUALLY means and its context. aka a harem involving two or more women that have sex with each other are bisexual not yuri. B. has never been in a real threesom because.... news flash real threesoms involves everyone pleasuring everyone. Aka you are on your back eating one while the other is riding you and both women are making out, or doing a woman from behind while she is eating the other makes not only the memory hotter, but allows the guy to last longer with the extra help and prolongs the experience for more fun time. To be honest, most men can barely handle one woman that has an active libido, and two is pushing it to the extreme, so a little help here and there makes sure everyone is satisfied. All those people who say "no yuri" would rather leave a woman out of the fun and unsatisfied. These are the ones who will never experience a threesom in real life because of their pride or maybe they are a prude or just ignorant and live in lala land. I laugh at the idiocy when people say no yuri in harem stories.

I don't think the author even knows what an active game of chess looks like, lol.

I'm done with this story. if it was on any other worlds, I wouldn't have minded, but the fact that this is in the DxD universe and the author just skips over lemon scenarios that he deliberately put his characters in is pathetic and disingenuous to the readers of this story. In my opinion, if the author can write a detailed fight scene that is bloody and can accurately depict a fight, they can write a light lemon scene, instead of just straight up skipping the scene like a _____ .

with how short all these chapters are, you should be pumping them out left and right, lol