Kazrrr

I like earth and fire more.

Hey, Author here! I genuinely hope you like this story. I've wrote one before and y'all seemed to like it, but I decided I want to make a MHA/BNHA one first before One Piece. I am not good at story telling but enjoy :P

Honestly, I like the story, the problem I have is how it's written. It's very hard to read this. When someone talks try surrounding the text with " instead of adding an - in front of the message. But overall, I like the rest of it. Solid characters and world-building. I recommend this story if you re-write it.

That's actually an idea I like. <3

hmm, I guess you're right. But I always liked the idea of making my own crew. Thanks for the ideas though 🫶🏼

I mean: "To get your swords of course!" I said back loud enough for him to hear.

Thanks for the chapter!

STOP WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS!!! YOURE GETTING ME TOO EXCITED! Please make the mc end up with Hina instead of Chizuru!

Arigato for the chapter :3

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