TalesByJaz

I am okay with criticism and I replied appropriately when I got criticised the first time. However even after working on the criticism and making the book better in later chapters, if I get called out for the same issues, it feels more like trolling to me. If someone just continues to read the book they will find that I have improved the writing and story since the criticism.

Wrong use of words😅 but Harry in his disguise was not wearing a hood. The face can be seen.

Tried to add my own twists everywhere in the book. I am not brave enough to completely go away from the plot for my first book. It is easier to write if you stick to the original plot.

First book so still in the learning phase. Characters I have found, is the hardest part of writing in the fic. Also, the gpt is my editor. Had issues giving it a proper prompt in early chapters. I promise it had become good in the later part of the book.

Sorry for the no replies. It is my first book and hence could not handle the trolling well. It was leading me to stop writing the book. The workaround I found was to read only the comments on my Patreon. No trolling there. I use chatgpt as the final editor for my chapters. So I just write the story myself and make AI correct all the spelling and grammar mistakes. Did not know how to use it properly in the early chapters. Becomes better and more fun to read in later chapters.

Thanks for the review. The knight training is going to be the hero of the Basilisk fight. So had to speed things up to get Harry at a decent level before that fight.

In 10 chapters it will pick up pace.

In 10 chapters. About 1 week.

I am getting this comment in every chapter. You will have to wait. This will happen only when Harry goes to Hogwarts which is about 25 chapters away.

That’s the read for the two chapters released that day