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Rerian11drespondió a Spirit_Immortalwasn't it in third pov
In addition, her tall stature made the mounds on her chest particularly conspicuous. Her officer uniform also gave her beauty a heroic spirit; however, I'm afraid you cannot describe her temperament with the same words.- Rerian11drespondió a The_Golden_Age_
I predicted this back in chapter two 🥱
"You fucking bastard," Anna smiled, walking slowly towards Cassius, "Didn't I tell you to eat the cupcake?" - Rerian12drespondió a
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"You fucking bastard," Anna smiled, walking slowly towards Cassius, "Didn't I tell you to eat the cupcake?" - Rerian1mthComentado por
if it's not obvious yet, I'm switching to first pov from Cassius's perspective. I will still write like the previous chapter on some occasions depending on how much of the scene I want to cover. don't worry though, Cassius is observant and reflective so it almost feels like he's narrating his own story as it happens. 😂
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - Rerian1mthrespondió a Malcolm_Massey
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Kar was the emperor 600 years ago tho. it's been a long time...
"Ohh, young boy. You look just like emperor Karavan did when he was younger." An old lady who was sitting in a fancy mahogany lounge chair, near a grand oak desk said, while trying to point at Cassius with her weak finger, and smiling faintly. - Rerian1mthrespondió a Malcolm_Massey
They say elementalist, but who knows?
These 4 dukedoms are now known as the founding families. Because they were the beginning of the new empire that we have now - the Karavan empire. Named after crown prince Karavan the first ever S-rank. - Rerian1mthrespondió a Hardy1j
yep.
He sat down on the seat and after taking the lid off, he took out the cupcake that was inside. This was a cupcake Anna made for him. - Rerian1mthrespondió a Hardy1j
it was said that he never considered it. even now, he wasn't considering it he was just being anxious. it's like when you go to your parents asking "Will you still love me if I fail my exams?" You know the answer will be yes but you ask anyways.
Those words put Cassius at ease, but there was still another question that kept biting him at the back of his heart: Will you still love me if I don't awaken? - Rerian1mthComentado por
he went to get the milk. literally.
The moment she showed signs of being pregnant, the man abandoned her, saying that he was going to buy milk. It was the last time she saw him and why she raised her son alone. - Rerian1mthComentado por
💀 his first thought was putting his fingers in the baby's mouth?
But what could he do? His only possible interactions were with the baby, and he doubted that putting his finger in his mouth would do anything to help him with his plight. - Rerian1mthComentado por
why quote marks?
'Irregular?' - Rerian1mthComentado por
bad exposition it's too confusing
In the cruel silence of the scalding dry heat in the middle of Africa, near the borders of the West. The ground was covered in cracks from the lack of moisture that would have been a blessing from the skies. - Rerian1mthrespondió a novelmeister
oh ok, I agree. When I originally wrote this novel I didn't know about POV and simply followed the way the only novel I had read at the time structured it which was the third POV for the first chap and the first POV present for the rest then I realized I could switch to the third pov even after the first chapter so I did but I couldn't edit the chapters in the middle because they didn't fit well in third pov. there was simply too much internal monologue.
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it's more of a rhetorical thought of "wow the emperor gets information fast. makes sense considering this is the imperial palace. "
'Just how fast does word travel?' Cassius wondered. 'We came here as soon as the awakening ceremony ended.' - Rerian1mthrespondió a Snowy_T
because it just doesn't
PS: Pasta doesn't exist in this world.