HC_Pwnography

something is wrong here.... were they guns that shot trucks? or maybe truck-size bullets? is it even possible to reincarnate without truck-kun?

I can't read anymore past the mother losing the house because some fake paperwork BS. Good luck.

I think it's fine here, but with the past 9 chapters worth of self-deprecating remarks has now obviously created enmity between the reader and the author whenever one comes up now.

The excessive and over-exaggerated self-deprecation is just getting really old. If you write another novel, my suggestion is to just tone it down. we get it, he's poor and sad. Instead of adding these types of remarks all over for no reason, use things about his past to actively develop his character throughout the experience.

MC already knows this, so why does he keep asking how much stronger he has to be every time system doesn't tell him shit... at this point what's the point of the 50th floor, initially he shouldn't go there yet or "bad" things will happen to earth. Earth died anyway... so now what?

elena

sorry, but what does your statement have to do with my review? I didn't mention any of that in my review.

I had enough around CH 50. The story just drags on. Consists mostly of dialogue that makes little sense and a story that is uninteresting. I just started fast scanning chapters after it to see if anything caught my eye... nope, it's just the same slow pace and boring dialogue.

Had to go back to here to figure out what "FCS" meant. If you are gonna use an acronym in the future, put it in (FCS) when you first introduce the unabreviated version at the very least. Makes it easier for the reader to recognize/understand it if it pops up later in the story.

don't you mean Regina Devareaux? you mixed both their names