Andrew_Magriu

use some other word other than extraordinarily which does not seems to be fit in this sentence

nose edit it

also called that girl (here I think there is some grammatical mistake correct it )

I think you should change I can ask ----tell me (the tense seems wrong check it )

Highly recommended The novel contains great plot and potential the only problem I found is that there are less chapters I want moreeeeee

Hey please author update the discord link here also if anyone have the link please give it on comments or send it to me this is my discord id - akhil3528

Hey can you please update your discord link